Inside Voices
Why Characters Should Talk to Themselves and How to Do it Right

Internal dialogue is one of the most powerful ways to bring characters to life, but it’s also one of the trickiest. 


Many fiction writers struggle to capture an authentic inner voice, and it shows on the page. Inside Voices helps you craft internal thoughts that sound natural, reveal emotion, and pull readers closer—without rambling, under-delivering, or stalling your story.


Through insightful tips, practical examples, and honest advice on what works (and what doesn’t), you'll learn exactly when and how to use internal dialogue to deepen character connection and keep your narrative flowing.


Testimonials
Can Make Your Writing Sparkle 
Shari Held

I would recommend this course to all writers. I've taken many classes and read numerous craft books over the years, and I don't recall this topic ever being covered. That's too bad, because learning when and where to include internal dialogue can make your writing sparkle.” 

This Really Helped
Lorelei Hunt

“I had no experience, so this really helped. I liked the real examples of good versus bad, and how there was lots of real experience with your editing and common pitfalls that new writers fall into.” 

Instructs You on All the Pertinent Points
Louise 

 “The course broke the subject down in easy-to-understand-and-absorb pieces. I liked the short length of the videos and the 'to the point' instruction. It's quick and instructs you on all the pertinent points. I will keep the info as reference.”  


What You'll Get:

 6 bite-sized video lessons with closed captioning:


  • Getting Inside Their Heads—An Intro to Internal Dialogue 
  • Inside and Out—Mastering Indirect and Direct Internal Dialogue 
  •  Dos and Don’ts of Building an Authentic Inner Voice 
  •  Close Connection—Removing Barriers in Internal Dialogue 
  •  The Nuts and Bolts of Internal Dialogue 
  •  Your Inner Dialogue Toolbox—Final Recap


 PDF slide decks for a closer look at the main takeaways and examples 


 Written Q & A that answers common questions and shares strategic solutions 

 

 Cheat sheet recaps to apply what you’ve learned 


Plus, You'll Receive These Bonuses

 The Writer's Character Companion—Discover What Makes Your Characters Tick One Prompt at a Time  — A 63-page printable journal to explore your characters’ thoughts, fears, beliefs, and contradictions. You’ll develop a deeper understanding of their hidden motivations, so your internal dialogue rings true.


 Triggered! Journaling Through Your Character's Reactions — This short but impactful tool helps you uncover your characters’ emotional responses to pivotal moments in their lives. You’ll reflect on what drives their choices and how to convey it.

Hi, I'm Stacy Juba.

Through my online courses and freelance editing work, I help writers strengthen their storytelling and build deeper connections between their characters and readers.


As a fiction writer myself, I know how tricky internal dialogue can be. It’s one of the hardest parts to get right and one of the easiest to overlook.


As an editor, I find myself leaving the same comments on client manuscripts again and again: 


 “What is she thinking here?” 

“Why?” 

“Get in his head.”

“Get out of his head. There's nothing happening.”


Inside Voices draws from the feedback I give writers every day, so your characters feel real and leave a lasting impression.


More Testimonials for Inside Voices
It Gave Me a Much Better Understanding
Marc

“It gave me a much better understanding of the techniques used, especially for introducing internal dialogue. My biggest takeaway was learning how to balance internal dialogue with the other narrative essentials. I would guarantee they will come away with a true understanding of the oft-tricky to implement internal dialogue.”  

Each Lesson Was Clear And Concise
Tali Sarnetzky

“The tips you gave were easy to follow and implement and I am very grateful for that. Each lesson was clear and concise, gave excellent examples, and left me feeling better prepared to write internal dialogues. It really makes me feel great when I know I am going to elevate a skill thanks to someone’s clear guidance.”  



Give your characters the strong inner voices they deserve, and turn internal dialogue into one of the most useful techniques you can master.

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